Frankie Paige’s Reviews > Enigma Black > Status Update

Firefighters would absolutely not pull a ladder away from a searchable building with a person in it. Ugh. No.

"Smoke (...) seeped in at a million miles a minute," That's... Not... How... SEEPING... Works?... (seep: to enter or penetrate slowly)

Am I supposed to be impressed by Celaine lifting pieces of drywall "half her size?" Drywall ain't heavy. A full piece several times Celaine's size is barely 50 pounds.

"Flustered" doctors and nurses?... Never seen those in an emergency. They're kind of built for those. Especially at an ICU.

I have so many questions. If there are almost 3 minutes left, why not grab the bomb and run with it? Before, they could get across long distances in superhuman time, but now sprinting to one of the nearby abandoned buildings is too hard? Or why not wrap it in your suit? It could take serious damage before, so wouldn't it significantly contain an explosion? Hmmm...

A random guy staring at newborns and openly admitting none are his and he doesn't have anyone about to give birth to his child either? My maternity ward would have been on lockdown, not looking at the creep "with curiosity."

Why does she have to draw a map when any hospital would have a floor plan posted everywhere, for evacuation purposes?

Blake and Celaine have really good banter. But. It doesn't go anywhere. It doesn't advance the story. And so it's getting boring. (At the same time, I have more and more respect for the author. She wrote a book. She did it. While I'm being super picky having written nothing, risked nothing.)

Her jeans got looser? With all those new rippling muscles? Hmmm.

If they know the suits become weakened with use, and the people inside the suits are such invaluable assets, why not test and replace the suits regularly, rather than keep giving people organ transplants? I'm so confused.