Red Reader’s Reviews > Be Mine > Status Update

Rock Chick story...SO.MANY.parentheses. After about the fourth set in as many paragraphs it got kind of annoying.I feel like I missed part of the story because (parentheses)=eyeroll. I liked Indy. She's got curves and fluff and her guy loves it! I think that was my favorite part! Could have been so much more had we got to see the "You're doing that thing with your mouth.Without the dress. But keep the shoes."