Salieri’s Reviews > Carmilla > Status Update
Salieri
is 50% done
A little over halfway through and second time the narrator misgenders LaFontaine. It's a small amount compared to the number of times the narrator gets it right but it definitely needs to be corrected.
— Feb 27, 2019 03:52AM
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Salieri
is 60% done
Third misgendering for LaFontaine, also there's something about a frown spreading accross someone's jaw? How does one frown with their jaw? Is it an actual saying or is it as weird as it sounds to me?
— Feb 27, 2019 05:02AM
Salieri
is 25% done
Sad to say it's not that great so far. A lot of the humour and the chemistry from the webseries doesn't translate well on the page, the writing isn't really great and for now, I've seen nothing that would justify this novel's existence :(
— Feb 24, 2019 02:29PM
