Mary’s Reviews > Holiday Bear > Status Update
Mary
is 3% done
Not good. Telling not showing removes me way to much from the story. Already blasted through the background of mc’s history with her cheating ex.
— Mar 03, 2019 11:07AM
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Mary
is 44% done
Very disjointed. The characters are mere tropes. Most likely not going to read anything else from this author.
— Mar 03, 2019 02:11PM
Mary
is 31% done
So over the top cheesy and more tell than show, so I’m not to into it.
— Mar 03, 2019 01:08PM
