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Struggling with this one. Narrator is obsessed with gender and labeling people with what he thinks is the appropriate one, and constantly breaking the 4th wall and the writing style is deliberately archaic, given to long descriptions. I frequently find myself too annoyed to enjoy the story.
— Dec 16, 2018 12:53PM

