Ryan Lawler’s Reviews > Crossing Mother's Grave > Status Update
Ryan Lawler
is 57% done
Too much dialogue, and not enough differentiation between character voices
— Dec 31, 2012 09:41PM
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Ryan Lawler
is 32% done
Its like I can hear the d20 as it tumbles across the table
— Dec 31, 2012 05:22AM
Ryan Lawler
is 24% done
Lots of dialogue. Having difficulty identifying what the plot is supposed to be.
— Dec 26, 2012 09:58PM
Ryan Lawler
is 10% done
Pretty good so far. Writing has improved greatly and is much more consistent than the first book. The story has been a little bit slow to start, but hopefully this slower and more deliberate pace will lead to some better character development for all characters.
— Dec 23, 2012 07:02AM
