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Tara
is 61% done
So much potential but the editing is killing the whole experience
— Jan 02, 2013 01:58AM
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Tara
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ughhhhhh this is all over the damn place! I'm seriously going to break my resolution of no cussing before day 2 is over
— Jan 02, 2013 09:10AM
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Jan 02, 2013 11:21AM
I got it after Christmas. The thing is that the entire story has no flow. It's choppy and almost to the point of being unreadable. The entire story would have to be redone
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