Jilrene’s Reviews > Heartlands > Status Update

I'm struggling to keep reading. Too many characters who keep doing things that make no sense because I don't have all the information. The head hopping is getting on my nerves. Especially when we hop just as a big reveal is about to happen. The flashbacks don't fit, either. Why are they happening?

Lots of characters introduced in the first couple chapters. And flashbacks that don't connect to anyone yet.