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"I daresay there will be the pitter-patter of children’s feet on the floor’s of Grayson Hall err long.”
— Jan 04, 2013 07:13AM
Err?
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On knees of half melted butter she stepped into the doorway." ***Yes,there is a quotation mark.
— Jan 05, 2013 04:08AM
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“This is absolute ludicrous,”
— Jan 04, 2013 08:14PM
!!!! Nodding off shortly for the evening, so no more updates today.
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Each flame danced and weaved to it’s own rhythm...
— Jan 04, 2013 08:11PM
Ummm, it's?
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She ground her teeth, reigning in her impatience.
— Jan 04, 2013 07:38PM
Now begs the question. Is she now ruling her impatience or should she be reining in her impatience like one reins in a horse? Cute video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=euGG7s...
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With measured menace Alex stalked forward, a predatory gaze fixed on the scalawag.
— Jan 04, 2013 05:41PM
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Jan 04, 2013 05:43PM
This is crap. Why are you reading it?
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I don't know. I'm too brain dead to pick up a good book. The story actually has possibilities, but the author needs some help from a good editor.
Come back to Mary Stewart when you get some sleep...
Kim wrote: ""Quivering cleavage" *snort*"ETA. A good editor might recommend the author remove a bunch of adjectives and adverbs. If that happened, the book could be reduced to the size of a pamphlet.
Jeannette wrote: "Come back to Mary Stewart when you get some sleep..."I'll be back at it tomorrow with bells on.
@ Jane, liking the update or Kim's comment?
