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So far the plot is fairly interesting but I don't care for the writing much at all. It's simplistic, but not succinct. There a many awkward sentences that I wish had been changed in editing. You can't try to be a minimalist author unless every single sentence is carefully worded.
— Mar 25, 2019 04:16PM

