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Topher Colin
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have had this for almost 2 years, since i got my kindle; finally reading it, and underwhelmed. seems many reviews agree with me. hmmm....
— Apr 04, 2019 08:39PM
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Topher Colin
is finished
yup, definitely not what i wanted it to be, or what it could have been.. too many stories, too many poorly explained characters, too much action without description or story, and too much cussing (Evenf or me who cusses like a sailor often).
— Apr 04, 2019 11:57PM
Topher Colin
is on page 99 of 308
yup, it's a bad one. too many things going on this book - co-plot A, co-plot B, subplots C D and E, sideplot F - the legal world. the mafia world. the russian underground world. the middle east crime world. etc etc etc. it's like how many disparate people, places and things can one pull together, blend on high, and throw together as a story. also *extra* violent parts even for a violent story.
— Apr 04, 2019 08:52PM

