Jeremy Jones’s Reviews > Godeena: SF Novel > Status Update

“John Stronghill known as Brain, broke his silence for the first time since Hades.”

I want to write a book where a character that’s been there the entire time just suddenly appears.

Did he just kill off everyone but Henery and Maria?

There’s a good example of how this book flows on this page. We’ve established that Maria is physic but, when she reveals something about the main character that, “Nobody could ever know” he yells, “Who told you!”

She is physic. Duh.

Hey we’re getting into the plot only 40% in?

And somehow, the fact that we’ve not gotten to the plot is the least of the problems.

And there’s no way I believe that Nancy is a professional soldier at this point.