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Laura
is 76% done
On Clouds of Obsession - 2 stars. This story just didn't ring true for me. There was no connection between the brothers that I could feel and it seemed like the relationship just sprung out of nowhere.
— Jan 07, 2013 05:07AM
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Laura
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On the Edge - 4 stars. This was the most realistic of the stories, IMO. It was hard watching Andrew's struggle to accept the relationship between himself and Ben. The was no instant fix - they had to work through the acceptance. Great story.
— Jan 07, 2013 10:38AM
Laura
is 58% done
Depression, Love, and Swimming Pools - 3 stats. Tough one - very well written but I'm concerned about Derrick's mental health and ability to make sound choices. I also felt Cale swung from being resentful and unaffected by Derrick's behaviors to being at his mercy entirely to quickly and without the internal conflict I would have expected.
— Jan 06, 2013 09:54PM
Laura
is 43% done
Analgesia - 4 stars. I really enjoyed this story. Very real in its telling. Loved the bickering and the pet names Ethan used. I'd love to read a full length story based on them.
— Jan 06, 2013 01:42PM
Laura
is 25% done
War and Peace and Brotherhood - 2 stars. Great concept for the "infected" and how it spread, sadly I just couldn't get into it. I was confused a lot and had to re-read more then a few times to figure out what I was missing.
— Jan 06, 2013 06:06AM
