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Liz
is 43% done
Awkward forcing of marine similes and painfully overdone narration. My mother died at the same age as Eureka’s, and I can identify with the realistic situation of a girl that is simultaneously angry and wounded by her isolation, while exacerbating it with nearly every action, and still recognize sloppy writing and an inability to make your character sympathetic, even when she’s being self involved.
— Apr 17, 2019 08:33PM
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