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Elithanathile
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// I want to cry for Ren ... he's buying his shitty family presents with his savings - beautiful presents they don't give a fuck about [the ungrateful bastards], might I mention, and I so badly want him to tell his mother and sister to fuck off FOREVER!!!
— Apr 19, 2019 01:29PM
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Elithanathile
is finished
// Awwwww :-)!! I want the stories of:
1. Beck
2. Lorenzo
3. Ezra
4. Isaac
And I'm sure there are a few others that I either haven't mentioned or haven't met yet :-)!!
— Apr 19, 2019 07:52PM
1. Beck
2. Lorenzo
3. Ezra
4. Isaac
And I'm sure there are a few others that I either haven't mentioned or haven't met yet :-)!!
Elithanathile
is 87% done
// Wow, well that was a really unexpected turn of events o__O!!
— Apr 19, 2019 07:10PM
Elithanathile
is 67% done
// Seriously, whatever made this author decide to give us such wonderful moments, and such a beautiful and explicit sex scene here, all I'll say is keep doing it ... keep giving it to us over and over and over, more more more :-D!!! This scene between Ren and Colt = HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT!!!
— Apr 19, 2019 06:29PM
Elithanathile
is 67% done
// This author is DEFINITELY surprising me with the wonderful sex scenes she has written here ... much much much MUCH better, hotter, more explicit, and more decadent than anything she has EVER written before, and I am ADORING it!!! The sex scenes here are WONDERFUL and may this author continue giving them just like this ... and may there be more of the explicit hotness in each book ;-)!!
— Apr 19, 2019 06:25PM
Elithanathile
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// My G-d ... I am PLATONICALLY in love with Ren too <3333!! What a genuine, loyal, kind, generous, tender-hearted, wonderful, remarkable, beautiful, amazing, magnificent man <3333333333!!
— Apr 19, 2019 03:25PM
Elithanathile
is 32% done
// The snark here is strong and I am totally laugh-crying right now :-D!!!!!
YOU GO, COLT & REN <333!!!
— Apr 19, 2019 03:22PM
YOU GO, COLT & REN <333!!!
Elithanathile
is 28% done
// Ooooooooooooo ... rawr that was a delicious first kiss scene :-D!!!
— Apr 19, 2019 02:06PM
Elithanathile
is 25% done
// Also, does every chapter header have to be such a massive seahorse that takes up more than 1/2 the page?!!? It's a clear attempt to fill a page it seems ... I mean what other reason would she have?!!? Dude, it's okay to make the cute little [huge!!] seahorse a bit smaller!!!
— Apr 19, 2019 01:53PM
Elithanathile
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// I don't know why this author doesn't try to leap out of her own comfort zone, and write books with dual POVs; they'd really really benefit from it!!
I feel like she consistently sticks within safe and formulated boundaries, and the books clearly remain within that safe-zone, right along with her!!
Due to that, I also think she does well because her readers glide along within the series trajectory, but that's it!!
— Apr 19, 2019 01:51PM
I feel like she consistently sticks within safe and formulated boundaries, and the books clearly remain within that safe-zone, right along with her!!
Due to that, I also think she does well because her readers glide along within the series trajectory, but that's it!!
Elithanathile
is 15% done
// ALSO, I hope Ren cuts his mother and his sister off financially! They're shitty to him and they're living off HIS money >:-o!!!!!!! NO NO NO NO NO NO NO!! This better not fucking continue!!!!
— Apr 19, 2019 01:25PM
