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OMG. <spoiler>
"Her velvet shealth slid down to envelope his sword..."
</spoiler> Really?!? Is that even an appropriate analogy? The author knows she writing about a Cheyenne Indian and not a pirate or a knight, right?
— Jan 13, 2013 07:24PM
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If they don't quit making out and talking like a couple from the 90s (1990s, mind you), I'm gonna flounce. I'm so mad, this story had so much potential. I want me another Dancing on Coals
— Jan 13, 2013 07:12PM
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I feel so sorry for the poor lieutenant. If I'm suppose to dislike him, it's not working.
— Jan 13, 2013 04:57PM
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The hero (or one of them) is a "drunken Cheyenne dog soldier." Good start! lol!
— Jan 12, 2013 10:22AM
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Jan 14, 2013 02:33AM
"Her doeskin bag enveloped his wampum" doesn't have the same flair, though.
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Karla (Mossy Love Grotto) wrote: ""Her doeskin bag enveloped his wampum" doesn't have the same flair, though."That should have come with a monitor warning. Glad my coworkers were elsewhere and didn't witness this. I could never have explained what was so funny :p
This has some purple prose! I think there is a point where he tells her to ride her "stallion"
Eep! But at least it fits with the genre! ;D
