DoodleBug’s Reviews > Dreaming in Chocolate > Status Update

Just finished the first chapter, and I can say flat out that I'm not impressed. The writing is tepid, bland even, and we've already been hit with Liberal Virtue Signalling. There's no sense of tension or emotion, even with the hint that Ella, the daughter, is "sick." It's just very flat, a pale imitation of Sarah Addision Allen's works, and I'm not sure it's worth continuing.