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P.J.
is 25% done
Reads like a trail journal. Good stories and no holding back, but lots of little errors are piling up.
— Jan 11, 2013 12:50AM
P.J.
is 7% done
Not a bad start. It's like reading a journal. A few grammar things, such as were instead of where. Also a spot I think was supposed to be bested was beasted.
— Jan 10, 2013 01:16AM
