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Don't care for the writing style...I hate excessive physical description...like okay I get it, she's Beautiful™ and he's Ruggedly Handsome™. You don't have to keep shoving it down my throat.
— May 18, 2019 12:02PM
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Cherrie
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I don’t know how long I’ll last with this book. Im v close to giving it up.
Why is the narrative swinging between The Professor and Mr.Emerson. Why not just use Gabriel when it’s his POV? It creates such a distance from the character.
And EXCESSIVE.DESCRIPTORS.OF.CHARACTERS.AND.ACTIONS.
Pls make it stop.
— May 18, 2019 09:55PM
Why is the narrative swinging between The Professor and Mr.Emerson. Why not just use Gabriel when it’s his POV? It creates such a distance from the character.
And EXCESSIVE.DESCRIPTORS.OF.CHARACTERS.AND.ACTIONS.
Pls make it stop.
