Jennifer Lavoie’s Reviews > Dog Days of Summer > Status Update

How difficult is it to get and pay an actual proofreader and not ask readers to do it for you? Look, I enjoy Aiden Bates stories but the inconsistencies are tedious. Stop pumping out books if you won’t reread them yourself. Patrick is drinking mineral water with lemon on one page because he’s driving and two pages later he’s swirling the last of his wine in the glass. Its LAZY as hell writing and editing.