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Wordsworth is 38% done
The writing has not improved. Now we've dealt with a number of coercive interludes between Patrick and Sophie. He comes on hard, she protests, he brushes her stated intentions aside. She freaks out, understandably, and flees. Not a great pattern...
May 20, 2019 03:04PM
The Reluctant Countess

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Wordsworth is 20% done
So far the writing is extremely clunky. I think we've gotten through half the romance clichés already, and unless the plot goes somewhere totally unexpected, we should be at the 70% mark of the plot pacing, too. What's going on?
May 14, 2019 12:40PM
The Reluctant Countess


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