Bex Dane’s Reviews > Falcon > Status Update

We never found her. I've searched everywhere, but just think of the life she could've had if she had left with Falcon and I that night. She could go to the opera and watch me sing. She could marry and have a man love her. All those women, they are all my mother. You see? They all deserve a chance at happiness, and no one has the right to take that from them.

Oh my lordy lordy good gordy—what we could see in his tights was X-rated!

"What the hell is in there?"
"My cock." He grinned.
Oh um. Well... "I mean what are the points?"
He laughed. "The points are barbells. Piercings." He kept talking when I didn't respond. "Metal posts with balls on each end."

This is Bex. I'm going to post my notes here from my third draft of Falcon as I go through it.