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Joan
is 38% done
I. Think I probably needed to read the earlier books to make any sense of Hamlet or Ophelia. Is this paranormal? The structure seems all wrong somehow. I’m at 38% and yet nothings happening and who the main love interest is eludes me.it needs tighter editing.
— Jun 03, 2019 08:52PM
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Joan
is 48% done
Chapter 12, I can’t read on. Rick is appalling and Grace is an utter idiot. She’s running from a man who treats her like he owns her and yet here she is, sex mad for a man who treats her like her also owns her by refusing to call her by her real name? What sort of intelligent woman would do that? Why hasn’t she simply told himto eff off? I’d... of course, she is in lust with the Neanderthal. Meh
— Jun 04, 2019 12:06AM
Joan
is 46% done
Rick is a patronising sexist git. He’s there to give her lessons in self defence, not treat her like a helpless female. Meh
— Jun 03, 2019 09:09PM
