Lili’s Reviews > New York > Status Update
Lili
is 68% done
Oh my God... it's funny but I always complain about the author using the same words over and over again and I'm always thinking "God!, someone get him/her a thesaurus!!"... now I think "someone tell her she doesn't have to use EVERY synonym in the thesaurus"
— Jan 24, 2013 07:48AM
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Lili
is 95% done
"my emotions swung through unthinkable arcs of oscillation, like a pendulum"...WTF!?
— Jan 24, 2013 08:42AM
Lili
is 69% done
"He used one hand to spread me apart while palpating the viscosity of my wetness with agile fingers"....OH MY GOD!
— Jan 24, 2013 08:19AM
Lili
is 68% done
"his diamond cutter bulging within his pants"...LOL!!!, are you serious???
— Jan 24, 2013 08:15AM

