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Jan
is 50% done
Parts of this remind me of Stephen King. Parts of it get stuck in repetition, hence parts of it require slogging through to get to the next development. Most telling - I look forward to picking it up and continuing to read the story.
— Jun 05, 2019 11:12AM
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Jan
is 86% done
Someone PLEASE TELL ME WHY you LAUNCHED an ATTACK on the Virals AT NIGHT????? Oh my god I am so disgusted I might need to slam this book shut.
— Jun 07, 2019 11:22AM
Jan
is 79% done
Ok here is an example of the writing that annoys me:
"Death had begun to ease across the boy's face. 'Oh,' he said. 'Oh.' Then something seemed to catch in he chest and he was still."
It's just so... so... juvenile is the closest I can come.
— Jun 06, 2019 12:43PM
"Death had begun to ease across the boy's face. 'Oh,' he said. 'Oh.' Then something seemed to catch in he chest and he was still."
It's just so... so... juvenile is the closest I can come.
