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Joyce
is 70% done
Character development feels rushed. For example, I understand why Lizanne would work with Clay in a profitless contract, but there lacks a triggering event for this decision, especially given her characterisation has always been towards "cold" and "calculating".
— Jun 07, 2019 08:28PM
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Joyce
is 50% done
Of all three characters, clay makes the least sense to me. One minute he's still thinking about escaping and next he is loyal to the group? He interacts with Silverpin maybe four, five times and suddenly he can't leave her?
Also, I feel like there would be more depth to the book if viewpoints from both sides are included
— Jun 03, 2019 12:01AM
Also, I feel like there would be more depth to the book if viewpoints from both sides are included
Joyce
is 13% done
87 pages in, and I'm still not sure who the main characters are or what the main plot is about...
— May 20, 2019 11:00PM
