Brynette Turner’s Reviews > Plain Jane and the Hit Man > Status Update
Brynette Turner
is 63% done
*** SPOILER ALERT ***
Ugh! I absolutely HATE when authors forget or muddle their own story lines. At 46% we're told that, as a baby, Baily was kidnapped when her mother was murdered and rescued by her father before human traffickers gave her to the buyer. Now, at 63% the details claim she was adopted by a couple before being rescued. But it doesn't say the couple bought her, so which story line is it?
— Jul 03, 2019 10:24AM
Ugh! I absolutely HATE when authors forget or muddle their own story lines. At 46% we're told that, as a baby, Baily was kidnapped when her mother was murdered and rescued by her father before human traffickers gave her to the buyer. Now, at 63% the details claim she was adopted by a couple before being rescued. But it doesn't say the couple bought her, so which story line is it?
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