Paula Brandon’s Reviews > In the Lawman's Protection > Status Update

Ren called Natalie "Peaches". They've just named their puppy "Cream". Peaches and cream. Get it? Ugh? I just threw up a little bit in my mouth.

"I gave Natalie the tracker last night. We can follow her, but I've got to get to the safe house to get the computer with the program."

None of them have an app on their phone for this?

"You guys, we've got problems. This town isn't really equipped for the number of people we brought here with all the press, not to mention gawkers."

Er merr gerrd, you mean Omega's plan is dumb, doesn't make sense and was poorly thought out? Colour me shocked!

"He's always been obsessed with you. His attacks on Omega Sector, killing agents and their loved ones, was in direct retaliation to what he thought Omega SWAT did to you at that bank six years ago."

THEN WHY THE FUCK WOULD YOU THINK SHE'S WORKING FOR HIM IF HE THINKS SHE'S DEAD?????????????

Ren doesn't want homeland security involved because she'd be treated like a hostile subject and that "it would be illegal to torture her but that didn't mean they couldn't make her incarcerated time extremely uncomfortable."

What, because it makes more sense to drug her, fake a train crash and force her to trek through the snow, not knowing where she's being taken?

Fuck this book.

But none of that gave Ren actionable intel. So he wasn't sure how to play this with her.

Well, it's more than you've had up until this point, Ren! Why is something you've seen with your own fucking eyes less reliable than the baseless assumptions you've currently been carrying?

You're a fucking, brain-dead loser.

Excuse my language. He is INFURIATING me.

Bloody hell, what is even the point with this whole crusade Ren has put in motion? Why not just drag to Omega Sector headquarters and fucking question her? It would be a lot less expensive and convoluted!

What an amazingly stupid book.

Ren calling Natalie "Peaches" all the time is also turning my stomach. I'm really hating on this book right now.

Was this some sort of weird phobia? Maybe just a reaction stress?

Hmm, Ren. Or possibly the fact YOU FUCKING DRUGGED HER YOU FUCKING PIECE OF SLIME!

Ren has DRUGGED our heroine and is now surprised that she might be reacting badly to it?

I'm just....I have no words. How could a woman write this???