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The robed man was coming for her.
"Make me an offer!" she shouted, backing away.
"No pain!" four voices chimed at once.
"No pain and escape to your world!"
"A million dollars."
"NO pain!" Jared shouted at last.
"If you're Kris's, pain like you've never known."
"That's not how this works, Rhyn!" she snapped.
The robed man tackled her, and the amulet went flying.
— Jul 11, 2019 11:29AM
"Make me an offer!" she shouted, backing away.
"No pain!" four voices chimed at once.
"No pain and escape to your world!"
"A million dollars."
"NO pain!" Jared shouted at last.
"If you're Kris's, pain like you've never known."
"That's not how this works, Rhyn!" she snapped.
The robed man tackled her, and the amulet went flying.
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"Hannah won't approve of you being here," she told him.
"Who's Hannah?"
"My sister."
"You have a sister?" he asked.
"You know, we mortals have real lives, too, or do you immortals assume we're all just sitting around waiting to have our lives intruded upon by the likes of you?" she snapped. She whirled and marched to a closet, wrenching it open.
Despite her ordeals, she still had her spark.
— Jul 11, 2019 09:29PM
"Who's Hannah?"
"My sister."
"You have a sister?" he asked.
"You know, we mortals have real lives, too, or do you immortals assume we're all just sitting around waiting to have our lives intruded upon by the likes of you?" she snapped. She whirled and marched to a closet, wrenching it open.
Despite her ordeals, she still had her spark.
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"Rhyn…" she whispered. "Was this supposed to happen?"
"Don't start."
"Don't start what?" She lifted her head to look at him. He propped his head with one folded arm, silver eyes glowing at her.
"You're my mate."
"So…that's permanent?"
"Yep."
"Guess that means I'll have to stop sleeping around," she retorted.
"Go ahead. Don't ask where I hide the bodies."
She chuckled. His confidence was too strong to shake.
— Jul 11, 2019 08:44PM
"Don't start."
"Don't start what?" She lifted her head to look at him. He propped his head with one folded arm, silver eyes glowing at her.
"You're my mate."
"So…that's permanent?"
"Yep."
"Guess that means I'll have to stop sleeping around," she retorted.
"Go ahead. Don't ask where I hide the bodies."
She chuckled. His confidence was too strong to shake.
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"Not a warrior," she said, her questioning look lingering on Katie's neck. "Wow, really?"
"Yeah, really," Ully said. "Megan, this is Katie. Katie, Megan. Megan is one of the chick fighters."
"Female warriors," Megan said, raising an eyebrow in warning.
"I'm too wimpy to beat up," he reminded her.
"Right. I'll take her from here."
"But I-"
"Out."
Katie almost smiled at his fallen face.
— Jul 11, 2019 07:09PM
"Yeah, really," Ully said. "Megan, this is Katie. Katie, Megan. Megan is one of the chick fighters."
"Female warriors," Megan said, raising an eyebrow in warning.
"I'm too wimpy to beat up," he reminded her.
"Right. I'll take her from here."
"But I-"
"Out."
Katie almost smiled at his fallen face.
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"He only gets one, unless he planned on dying dead soon. If he doesn't die-dead, he'd have to spend eternity with you. Maybe it is predestined. He's the least friendly Ancient I've ever met."
"He's been in Hell for a long time," she replied. "Wait, did you say eternity?"
"Of course."
A familiar headache started. She hadn't been able to keep a job or a boyfriend for more than a few months, let alone an eternity!
— Jul 11, 2019 04:40PM
"He's been in Hell for a long time," she replied. "Wait, did you say eternity?"
"Of course."
A familiar headache started. She hadn't been able to keep a job or a boyfriend for more than a few months, let alone an eternity!
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He changed mechanically, as if accustomed to removing bloody clothing several times a day. He tugged on loose judo pants and flung himself on his back on the bed nearest the door.
"You're acting like you're normal," she objected, tears rising. "What the fuck is wrong with you? You run around turning into animals and tearing off people's heads and then just…a bed and breakfast? Come on!"
— Jul 11, 2019 03:01PM
"You're acting like you're normal," she objected, tears rising. "What the fuck is wrong with you? You run around turning into animals and tearing off people's heads and then just…a bed and breakfast? Come on!"
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The two German women sharing her room ceased talking when she entered and looked her over before one said in halting English, "You're American."
"That obvious?" Katie returned, tossing the sleeping bag and a small shaving bag filled with basics on one bunk.
"I like your clothes," the other said, gazing at her jumpsuit. "Very fashionable."
At least Hell kept up with the latest styles, she thought darkly.
— Jul 11, 2019 01:12PM
"That obvious?" Katie returned, tossing the sleeping bag and a small shaving bag filled with basics on one bunk.
"I like your clothes," the other said, gazing at her jumpsuit. "Very fashionable."
At least Hell kept up with the latest styles, she thought darkly.
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If she had the amulet and could bargain for protection - and one of them not eating her in exchange for her freedom - she wondered if she couldn't escape.
"No pain," Rhyn said with a husky chuckle.
"Not too much pain, and I'll raise you a promise not to fuck you till you're dead," Jared offered.
"Jesus," she muttered.
"He ain't coming here," a voice down the hallway snickered.
"But I am!" another chortled.
— Jul 11, 2019 10:44AM
"No pain," Rhyn said with a husky chuckle.
"Not too much pain, and I'll raise you a promise not to fuck you till you're dead," Jared offered.
"Jesus," she muttered.
"He ain't coming here," a voice down the hallway snickered.
"But I am!" another chortled.
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"Lunchmeat," the male voice called
She moved to the bars at the front of her cell, aware the beast across the hall doing the same with a growl. Pale hands draped through bars two cells down from the beast.
"Did you just call me lunchmeat?" she asked
"Oh yeah. A little mortal meat, some cheese and crackers. How ya doin', lunchmeat?"
"Pretty shitty. Is there anyone here who doesn't want to eat me or drink my blood?"
— Jul 11, 2019 09:01AM
She moved to the bars at the front of her cell, aware the beast across the hall doing the same with a growl. Pale hands draped through bars two cells down from the beast.
"Did you just call me lunchmeat?" she asked
"Oh yeah. A little mortal meat, some cheese and crackers. How ya doin', lunchmeat?"
"Pretty shitty. Is there anyone here who doesn't want to eat me or drink my blood?"
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"Do Gabriel and Toby work for you?" she asked.
"In a sense."
"What does that mean?"
"Death dealers don't work for anyone really, just Death, though I do buy assassinations from him on occasion," he said.
Buy assassinations, like he was ordering a new couch for his study.
"Oh," she managed.
— Jul 10, 2019 09:32PM
"In a sense."
"What does that mean?"
"Death dealers don't work for anyone really, just Death, though I do buy assassinations from him on occasion," he said.
Buy assassinations, like he was ordering a new couch for his study.
"Oh," she managed.
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"Brought you something"
Gabriel held out a vial he'd last seen in the hand of a furious Death. A thrill went through Rhyn as he claimed it. He popped the top…
For the first time in years he felt whole again. He tested his ability to control the familiar magic. Hell buffered his natural inability to rein in his magic.
"Who'd you kill for this?"
"I have other means of obtaining stuff" Gabriel said with some offense.
— Jul 10, 2019 05:34PM
Gabriel held out a vial he'd last seen in the hand of a furious Death. A thrill went through Rhyn as he claimed it. He popped the top…
For the first time in years he felt whole again. He tested his ability to control the familiar magic. Hell buffered his natural inability to rein in his magic.
"Who'd you kill for this?"
"I have other means of obtaining stuff" Gabriel said with some offense.
