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Tara Mcmillan
is 20% done
The editing is just as bad, if not worse, in this book compared to the last one. The worst is the timing.
In the beginning, at the bonding ceremony, it is Friday. The story resumes after the runon Monday. So why does Chasen keep referring to ceremony night as "yesterday" more than he does "Friday". Even if he just stuck with one it would be fine, but 80% of the time it's "yesterday" and the other 20% is "Friday".
— Jul 15, 2019 06:14PM
In the beginning, at the bonding ceremony, it is Friday. The story resumes after the runon Monday. So why does Chasen keep referring to ceremony night as "yesterday" more than he does "Friday". Even if he just stuck with one it would be fine, but 80% of the time it's "yesterday" and the other 20% is "Friday".
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