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Ugh. How did this get published and where was the editor? I want to take a red pen and make corrections.
— Feb 06, 2013 06:58PM
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Jennifer
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This writing is atrocious. State the obvious and then restate it. Yikes.
— Feb 04, 2013 05:37PM
Jennifer
is on page 4 of 290
Uh oh. How many consecutive sentences contain the word scene? 4!
— Feb 04, 2013 04:17PM
