Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer’s Reviews > Beautiful To Me: A Little Mermaid Retelling > Status Update

...I fell for the man who made me beautiful to me.

Awww I love their love story.... then Sienna giving up her chance at life for Arlando and Ariel... was her chance to have the soul she longed for. Still the end end was long... really long.

This is totally capturing me! I really like Ariel and how sensible she is. And her friendship with the royal siblings. Her love of reading. Now a frogling has appeared and may be the princesses’ mate?! And they’re going to the snow!

The thing with the hedge was neat! Dolphin shapes with waves lol!

“My eyes stung from her kind words, and I fidgeted, not quite sure how to respond to such genuine praise of my work, not quite sure what to with such well-meaning words, how to hold them, how to take them with me.”

Loved this showing is Ariel’s personality.

Gotten better and I like Ariel but ALL THE TELLING!

GAAAAAHHHH so much telling! Please don’t tell me another fact and instead show me. Ariel is a good girl but different... the only fat mermaid?!