Carina’s Reviews > The Seven Stars > Status Update
Carina
is 72% done
So, on page 238 you describe someone who bumped into someone else, specifically stating that our female lead SAW THEM. On page 239, two pages later, maybe 30 minutes later in book time she claims she never saw them. WTF
— Jul 31, 2019 05:25AM
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Carina
is 92% done
If she fucking worked for a government agency how the fuck would she not realise that breaking and entering and fucking stealing evidence invalidates that evidence. She might "be British" but the laws on this aren't that different. Stupid woman
— Jul 31, 2019 08:16AM
Carina
is 75% done
Whilst in America: "I'm not foreign I'm British" .... also this is the same idiot who earlier in the book had a hissy fit about being pulled back into the world of government agencies, and flat out refused to have a gun, who is now bullying an FBI agent with a "school marm" voice (as freaking if) and who is now insisting she is armed.... Talk about changing a characters personality to fit the terrible narrative.
— Jul 31, 2019 05:37AM
Carina
is 69% done
Brief BUT concise. SERIOUSLY??? Does the author know that being concise means BEING BLOODY BRIEF. Jeezus....
— Jul 31, 2019 05:04AM
Carina
is 68% done
Half past nine is considered early? Really? I suppose it gives Fiona or whatever her name is 7 hours of sleep but still.
— Jul 31, 2019 04:58AM
Carina
is 61% done
Also, she knows that whatever shady government agency she is working for said they'd look after her things so why does she think it's her parents who have been tidying up after her before the note? She's a bloody idiot is what she is
— Jul 31, 2019 04:31AM
Carina
is 61% done
This woman has been away from home for what, at most two weeks, and she expects her car battery to be dead AND her key fob. What the hell kind of car has she got where the battery drains in two weeks... and as for the key fob going in that time....
— Jul 31, 2019 04:30AM
Carina
is 47% done
Conversations are stilted, modern words are used so flow is poor, plot seems convoluted, it's not always clear whose talking and the cypher discussions make no sense
— Jul 26, 2019 10:59AM
