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Kelly (Maybedog)
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Cop says "gee," "darn," and "gosh." He's a well-respected detective at 26 after being a pro baseball player first. Bottoms are in charge of relationships? And gay guy is confused why straight guy knows all about blowjobs. A whole chapter was Jamie going on about needing gay cops. Little gems of writing pop out of this thick coating of bad which is why I'm still reading. Just odd.
— Feb 16, 2013 01:22AM
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Kelly (Maybedog)
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5'10" is not short, it's average Whose head am I in? Many times its completely unclear Formatting is insane Now it's a mutual compliment session. Internalized homophobia? EDITOR!!
— Feb 16, 2013 06:07AM
Kelly (Maybedog)
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What wealthy queer drinks bud & Michelobe? I forgot to mention earlier: two sons are wealthy, why is mom living so poor? Ok, this is ridiculous anti-government paranoia. STUPID. Who are these people who gave this book 5 stars?
— Feb 16, 2013 04:42AM
Kelly (Maybedog)
is on page 274 of 542
Civilian admits he's never fired a gun, cop still wants him to take it!! Is shocked civie has never fired one! So bizarre.
— Feb 16, 2013 02:06AM
Kelly (Maybedog)
is on page 273 of 542
Cop just tried to hand civilian a gun to take on official police sting. I am only still reading because I want to see what happens with the nonromance. This sounds like it wax written by someone young, just out of the closet, who knows little about gay life and has a pre-conceived notion if what bigotry is like without any direct experience. Big chip on shoulder. All over the place. Everything inconsistent.
— Feb 16, 2013 02:04AM
Kelly (Maybedog)
is on page 41 of 542
Telling, telling, telling. All telling so far, only a tiny bit of showing at the very beginning where it was confusing. Pages of a news story then more pages of Jamie reminiscing. Good God get on with it!
— Feb 09, 2013 05:34AM
