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Joan
is 50% done
The structure seems wrong somehow. The events don’t have enough impact to keep me engaged and I feel at this point I should be near the end of the story with the big reveal/climax just around the corner. Its disappointing really.
— Aug 20, 2019 07:23AM
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Joan
is 50% done
The structure seems wrong somehow. The events don’t have enough impact to keep me engaged and I feel at this point I should be near the end of the story with the big reveal/climax just around the corner. Its disappointing really.
— Aug 20, 2019 07:23AM
Joan
is 32% done
It beggars belief that in this world a woman in a first world country can reach her late twenties without being able to use a computer or know what they are capable of doing. This is just stupid.
— Aug 20, 2019 07:08AM
