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" eyes as black as the period at the end of a death sentence." LOL!
— Aug 31, 2019 08:18PM
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"The surf lashed the beach like a Roman flogging a Christian.". ... "'Today, I'll take care of you,' she would say, then smile, ivory teeth suspended between pink cheeks." 😜
— Sep 02, 2019 02:18PM
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I love this schlocky writing: "The gruesome screams of men and women dying in pain reverberated through the tropical air like the baneful wail of the last dinosaur."
— Aug 31, 2019 08:45PM
Kristi
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Oh and this gem: "The island jutted out of the sea like a mole on the perfect face of the Virgin Mary." What? Haha I think I love this over the top description. Really calls attention to itself in a distracting but humorous way. I don't *think* the humor is intentional, but who cares?
— Aug 31, 2019 08:20PM
