Jennifer’s Reviews > The Rise and Fall of D.O.D.O. > Status Update

This book needs editing *so badly*. Between 1/3 to 1/2 of it could be cut entirely, and the rest trimmed down and tightened up. The romance is unnecessary and doesn't actually progress at all (which the book acknowledges), and the book itself even admits that a large portion of its content is not relevant--it's just the authors having fun being clever and and entertaining themselves.