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is 55% done
An okay story, defininety not going to be one of my favourites, but worth my time I guess.
But what is it with that stupid repetition? Shit, shit, shit. Good, good, good. Sweet, sweet, sweet. Hard, hard, hard... Ggggrrrr...!! In the most random places, always 3 times the same word, what ever word.
Adding depth? Nope. Not working. Fucking annoying. That's all it is. Maybe once. But like after every paragraph. No.
— Sep 07, 2019 04:30AM
But what is it with that stupid repetition? Shit, shit, shit. Good, good, good. Sweet, sweet, sweet. Hard, hard, hard... Ggggrrrr...!! In the most random places, always 3 times the same word, what ever word.
Adding depth? Nope. Not working. Fucking annoying. That's all it is. Maybe once. But like after every paragraph. No.
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