Prentice’s Reviews > Task Force One: Dani's Got a Gun > Status Update
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I really, really wish erotica writers would stop overusing words like 'clench' and 'cream' in their writing. Rather than enjoying the story, I'm starting to be concerned about all the clenching this woman is doing and imagining her as some sort of pump bottle for lotion...
— Feb 24, 2013 09:20AM
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Really torn about whether I like this installment or not. Good point: Dani doesn't come off as completely weak minded. Just wish she wouldn't be so damn dazzled by the pretty -- make those boys work for it!
— Feb 23, 2013 07:56PM
