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Phoenix
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Ch 4 and Sasha is at Leyla and Mason’s for dinner. We get an extended cameo of the couple with the ch ending with them having Amal sex. I feel like it’s completely unnecessary bc they already had their HEA. The convo be them talking about how M feels thinking it could be his wife and child was good but the sex was gratuitous.
— Sep 23, 2019 08:40PM
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Opening w a school shooting - given the sad reality of guns in the US and the outrageous number of shootings, this could’ve done with a trigger warning - no pun intended
— Sep 23, 2019 07:33PM
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Opening chapter was intense! Like an episode of ER with medical jargon.
— Sep 23, 2019 07:28PM