E. Bard’s Reviews > Icefire > Status Update

This was a very quick novella and once I was used to the style, quite enjoyable. I do think that the story would have worked better if it was longer. There were only two concerns I had - the first was the writing style. It was a bit choppy in at the start, but then it seemed to fit the story and overall became a good fit. The other thing I couldn't quite get around was the 'romance' part. It needed to be longer.