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Sarah is 9% done
Continuity mistake: around 8/9% it is explained that Cassie goes to pick up Thatcher from jail at a quarter after 2am and it takes her about 2 to 3 hours to get him. They made a big deal out of how he called and woke her up and how crabby she was about it etc. Then they drove by the bar he was at, dropped his car off at his parents house and continued "home", but he had her detour to a young girls birthday party and
Oct 02, 2019 01:30PM
Banking the Billionaire (Billionaire Bad Boys, #2)

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Sarah is 13% done
No way possible someone coming awake from sleeping is even remotely that clueless to reality. Unless heavy drinking was involved no sober person wakes up, talks and moves, sitting up and really thinks they're dreaming. Super unrealistic. Annoyingly so.
Oct 02, 2019 02:42PM
Banking the Billionaire (Billionaire Bad Boys, #2)


Sarah
Sarah is 9% done
As they pull up to the curb, the little girl comes outside to greet him. Lets say all these stops would have taken 1 to 2 hours tops.. That would put this supposive child's party at 6 or 7 A.M.?? NO WAY!
Oct 02, 2019 01:33PM
Banking the Billionaire (Billionaire Bad Boys, #2)


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