Heather’s Reviews > Dead In The Water > Status Update
Heather
is 40% done
I lam fascinated by the persistence of the Farmer family to find a semblance of justice; however, the backstory was annoying. Surely a sister who lost her brother so young might view him as perfect, but this was excessive. She seems to try to persuade the reader that he didn’t deserve to be murdered just bc of his perfection. The truth - no one deserved his fate - even if he were just a blah guy. Editing needed.
— Oct 08, 2019 08:49AM
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