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So far this novella reads like someone trying to fit in with the cool kids by acting how they think tough kids act and cussing a lot when it really just sounds forced and out of place. Quite a bit of distracting grammatical errors that feels like the author either tried editing this himself, or just didn’t edit thoroughly at all. Story itself is good but the writing is just trying too hard.