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I can't stand this female protagonist. Maybe because I'm not a "young adult" reader but her cowardly demeanor is almost painful to listen through. I hope it changes.
— Oct 10, 2019 05:34AM
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Yeah! Take your time talking about random horseshit instead of passing the relevant information along as quickly as possible. Just fucking TELL them. I'll do whatever it takes, but I'm so scared and I can't move. And Darin. And his rippling muscles. And my oowies. JFC
— Oct 10, 2019 02:21PM
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Yeah! Take your time talking about random horseshit instead of passing the relevant information along as quickly as possible. Just fucking TELL them. I'll do whatever it takes, but I'm so scared and I can't move. And Darin. And his rippling muscles. And my oowies. JFC
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Very frustrating listening to these characters acting so useless. The female character is a dithering mess of inaction and sheepishness, the male character is a bad actor. You know when you're watching a movie where the protagonist is trying to act cool to get out of a bad situation but their demeanor is so "guilty," that they should be found out? These characters read the same way.
— Oct 09, 2019 05:51AM
