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Sakuko
is 31% done
Scary complains the cops are on his case cause he's gay. It couldn't possibly have to do with the fact that he admits to regular fights in his bar, or the scene earlier where he and Tank knocked out a guy because he was being rude to Elijah?
They don't make a good case for being able to run the bar without resorting to violence.
— Oct 15, 2019 11:39PM
They don't make a good case for being able to run the bar without resorting to violence.
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Sakuko
is 66% done
This book confused me. So Juvie says she's 12, but then they say she's about the same age as Princess, who's 5... and then they say she'll hit her teens in a year.
Did the author never once checked what they wrote or noted down character information? Did no one else read over this mess?
— Oct 16, 2019 11:31AM
Did the author never once checked what they wrote or noted down character information? Did no one else read over this mess?
Sakuko
is 40% done
Did they TRY to write the most cringey book possible, or was it a happy accident?
— Oct 16, 2019 02:02AM
Sakuko
is 30% done
So, they are essentially threaten rape, right? Cause they are very clear 'no' is not an acceptable answer.
They also just tell him they are dating him, full stop.
I already know this will be exhausting.
— Oct 15, 2019 10:12PM
They also just tell him they are dating him, full stop.
I already know this will be exhausting.
Sakuko
is 20% done
Awkward writing. So much pointless swearing, just to show they are rough guys.
Inconsistencies between actions and words (if you do a double-take and literally stare at someone, they are not a hard to read person).
The Mayor is written like a 20 year old, and that's being generous.
The whole plot just feels very shoe-horned in.
— Oct 15, 2019 02:56PM
Inconsistencies between actions and words (if you do a double-take and literally stare at someone, they are not a hard to read person).
The Mayor is written like a 20 year old, and that's being generous.
The whole plot just feels very shoe-horned in.
