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Y.I. Washington
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I had to stop reading this. The dialogue isn't organic. There's way too much repetitious exposition and dialogue. I just couldn't read very far without groaning. I really wanted to like this as the premise is awesome, however, I just can't bring myself to read anymore.
— Oct 28, 2019 10:31PM
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Y.I. Washington
is on page 168 of 732
While I do genuinely like the premise of this entire series, I am finding it difficult to really like the storytelling. The author uses way too many overly repetitive words and phrases. Has the author actually used a content editor or proofreader? Cutting out most of the repetition would leave room for better dialogue and more actual story.
At this point in the trilogy I'm had pressed to give more than 2.75 stars.
— Oct 12, 2019 05:46PM
At this point in the trilogy I'm had pressed to give more than 2.75 stars.
