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Hal
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Soooo..... I'm disappointed so far. I picked the whole trilogy up at Texas Teen Book Fest and while I like supporting self-published authors (please don't tell me this wasn't self published), this feels like a second draft. Like a 12 year old finished writing down the outline of what happened then went back and added detail to 10% of it. The only thing I'm interested in at at the moment is the murder mystery.
— Nov 05, 2019 07:10AM
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Hal
is on page 168 of 359
ugh, its still bad. I'm definitely not reading the other two, but am still gonna try and push through to finish this one just to figure out who the killer was and their motivation.
— Nov 05, 2019 11:06AM
