ChiiChii’s Reviews > Chasing the Dream > Status Update

ChiiChii
ChiiChii is 22% done
The story has a good premise but the formatting and writing need lots of work. Characters go from A-Z and skip everything else in between. Also feels like the author didn’t do any research into how artists are found, paid, and what they actually do.

They also do NOT know how to dress men, especially men of different age groups and social standing. Like... who wears a green stripped shirt and tucks it in? Gross.
Nov 07, 2019 04:32AM
Chasing the Dream (Everyone's Mechanic #1)

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ChiiChii
ChiiChii is 19% done
I have to say that this book would be more enjoyable if the format was fixed to actually be readable.
Nov 06, 2019 04:48AM
Chasing the Dream (Everyone's Mechanic #1)


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