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Chapter 1 -- Okay, the writing's a bit scattered and clumsy and way too tell-y. I get the feeling Agresti crammed a prologue and a chapter into this opening chapter. The backstory would have more impact if it were less rushed.
— Mar 20, 2013 09:06AM
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ALSO... WHY is an Anglo girl featured on the novel's cover art? Haven's description clearly indicates she is a young woman of color ("caramel skin, dark honey hair, dark amber eyes"). The artist could have at least deepened the model's skin tones.
— Mar 20, 2013 09:07AM
